tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3835759175144913342.post8716890343111019411..comments2023-07-05T07:11:23.667-07:00Comments on Caitlin Hinton's EDM 310 Blog: Blog Post #11Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14643922431195789443noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3835759175144913342.post-33301600154437241432013-11-11T20:08:12.011-08:002013-11-11T20:08:12.011-08:00" One impediment that I could encounter is my..." One impediment that I could encounter is my students running into sites that are not appropriate. You can find anything on the internet and with those kind of limitless possibilities, it is possible to run across sites or images that could be inappropriate for my students." iCurio would really help to prevent this if you were able to use it in your classroom. It would provide a safe search engine for the students to use. <br /><br />Good job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11195886895647293159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3835759175144913342.post-60495372353372824442013-11-11T19:33:15.992-08:002013-11-11T19:33:15.992-08:00Hey Caitlin!
Great post. It was very thorough and ...Hey Caitlin!<br />Great post. It was very thorough and well written. I really enjoyed the interviews with Ms. Cassidy. I also think that blogging would work great in an English classroom. It's an easy and efficient way for students to turn in essays and other assignments. I agree that students would probably try to visit other sites, but most schools have a block on certain sites anyway. Maybe this will be the case with every school by the time we graduate. <br />The only grammatical errors I noticed were:<br />You wrote, "The blog acts as a type of portfolio. It displays their work and it gives a great timeline of how far they have come each week." <br />A comma needs to be added after "work" and before "and".<br />You wrote, "It allows them to see what their children are doing and it lets them know what is going on in the classroom."<br />A comma needs to be added after "doing" and before "and".<br />Both sentences are run-on sentences. There is a subject and predicate before and after the "and" which needs to be separated with a comma. <br />Other than that, great post!Ashley Raileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068910310663888378noreply@blogger.com